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【转贴】再看《我脑中的橡皮擦》（剧情与高潮分析）
偶然注：这片文章是由艺珍的新加坡fans wisey发在奕奕珍心的，原文是用英文写，真的写得太好所以后来翻译成中文方便大家看。wisey在电影院看了4次《橡皮擦》，又时不时地把自己买的DVD掏出来看。写得真的不错呢。全文如下：
This review is for the Director’s Cut version of ‘Eraser’ or ‘A Moment To Remember’.
这篇文章是写给橡皮擦的导演剪辑版的。
Personally I enjoy the Director’s Cut a lot more because many of the plots are fully developed and there are lovely little details all over the place which make the story more convincing.
我个人更喜欢导演剪辑版，因为很多情节都更充分地展开了，而且也多了很多可爱的细节让故事更加的可信。
Unlike ‘The Classic’, AMTR is lacking in poetic beauty but herein is the attraction for me. It is more like real life to me. The love between Chul Soo and Su Jin feels real to me. Much have been written about AMTR already, I would like to expand on two main plots of the film and then show some highlights.
和Classic不一样，橡皮擦并不是那样富有诗意，可也正是这一点吸引了我。它对我而言更像真实的生活，我感觉到哲洙和秀珍之间的爱是真实存在的。橡皮擦已经被写过很多，我只就两个主要的情节和一些高潮说说。
Major plot 1: Chul Soo and Su Jin healed each other of their past
主要情节1：哲洙和秀珍为彼此治愈过去的伤口
This subplot tried to convince the audience the importance of Chul Soo and Su Jin to each other.
这条附线是为了使哲洙和秀珍对彼此的重要性更具有说服力。
Waiting for a man that never turned up
等待一个永远也不会出现的男人
In the Director’s Cut, you will learn that Su Jin was not completely over her relationship with the ex-boyfriend when she met Chul Soo and started dating with him. There was a scene whereby Su Jin finally went to the house she lived with Yong Min (the married ex-boyfriend) and finally packed up all her things and dropped the keys into the mail box.
在导演剪辑版里，你会发现在秀珍遇到哲洙并和他交往的时候，还并没有完全和她的前男友结束。有一个场面是秀珍最后去了她和勇民（已经结过婚的她的前男友）一起住过的地方，并且最后打包了她的东西，还有把钥匙放回到邮箱里去。
If she has not met Chul Soo, she would still be suffering from this relationship. She loved Yong Min so much that she was ready to forgo her family and go through any kind of persecution to be with him. She also told her brain specialist that she ‘felt like dying’ when Yong Min didn’t turn up at the train station.
如果她没有遇见哲洙，她可能还会继续为这关系而痛苦。她是这么的爱勇民，甚至愿意背叛自己的家人去和他一起面对任何可能出现的将来。她甚至对她的主治医生说，当勇民没有去他们约好的车站的时候，她“想死”。
Su Jin is a woman who put love as her first priority in life. She would do anything for her love. Whether her man was a married man or a lowly carpenter, as long as she loved him, she would give herself to him completely. Love was the reason for Su Jin’s existence.
秀珍是一个将爱情放在第一位的女人，她愿意为了爱去做任何事。不管她爱的人是一个有妇之夫或者是一个低微的木匠，只要她爱他，她就会为他付出一切。爱是秀珍存在的理由。
By falling in love with Chul Soo, the hurting from her relationship with Yong Min was healed. In the Director’s Cut, there were more scenes showing Su Jin courting Chul Soo. As the saying goes, falling in love is the best medicine for the last failed relationship.
因为爱上了哲洙，秀珍治好了因为以前那段关系而受的伤。在导演剪辑版里，这里有更多秀珍追求哲洙的戏。就和谚语里说的一样，爱是上一次失恋最好的药。
Su Jin had a lot more to do to heal Chul Soo of his past. Chul Soo just met his mother about 3 years ago in the movie. He was dumped by his mother since young and was treated badly by the old carpenter who brought him up. Hence he was a loner and had no faith in relationships. As far as he was concerned “life can be very cruel” and “no one can be happy forever”.
秀珍为了治好哲洙的过去做了很多。电影里，哲洙刚刚和阔别三年的妈妈见了面。他小时候就被妈妈抛弃，而养大他的木匠又对他百般虐待，所以他桀骜不羁并且不信任任何的“关系”，所以他认为“人生是很残酷的”，“没有人能永远快乐。”
A real carpenter can build a house in his heart
一个真正的木匠能在心里建造房子
She convinced Chul Soo to use his hard-earned savings to pay the debts of his mother. In the process, they lost the dream home they wanted to build. Obviously this was a huge blow for the couple who had already went to the land earmarked for their new home and even planned the layout of their new home. The scene that Su Jin comforted Chul Soo by snatching his cigarette and doing his card trick was heart-warming and lovely. When Chul Soo said that “we have no more money”, Su Jin said “No problem, I will pay for this meal. See! I promise to buy you dinner”
她说服了哲洙用他辛苦赚的钱为他妈妈偿还了债务，为此他们失去了想修建的梦想的家。很明显的之前有关于他们去到留出来修建新家的地的情节，他们还在那里计划着新家的结构。秀珍抢过来哲洙的香烟然后玩扑克游戏给他看来安慰他的场面也非常的可爱而窝心。当哲洙说：“我们没有那么多钱”，秀珍说：“没问题，我会给钱的。看！我来请你吃饭。”
Couple went to the site of their new dream home and Chul Soo pretending that he came through the door and off the tap that Su Jin forgot to off...
去梦想的家的土地时的他们，哲洙装做经过门口并且关掉秀珍忘记关的水龙头
I will buy you dinner
我来请你吃饭
Their relationship also taught Chul Soo about relationships. In another scene which was only in the Director’s Cut, Chul Soo explained his design of the new house he was commissioned to build. In the explanation, he told Su Jin how he got the inspiration from Su Jin’s family gatherings and how people moved in such a gathering. The joy and warmth of Su Jin’s family gatherings with their relatives was something that Chul Soo had never experienced.
他们的婚姻也使哲洙领会到了家人的意思。在一场只有导演版才有的戏中，哲洙解释着他新房子的设计。他告诉秀珍他是怎么从与秀珍家人的聚会中得到灵感的，还有聚会的人们会在这屋檐下怎么活动。与秀珍家人聚会的快乐与温暖是哲洙从未经历过的。
Chul Soo in Su Jin's family gathering
与秀珍家人聚会中的哲洙
Chul Soo told Su Jin she was the inspiration of this house
哲洙告诉秀珍，她就是他灵感的来源
Major plot 2: Their reactions and struggles on Alzhemier’s disease
主要情节2：他们对阿兹海默的反应和为此而痛苦挣扎
Hit by lightning
晴天霹雳
Immediately after Su Jin learnt about her condition, she didn’t know what to do. She could not even tell Chul Soo because she needed to make a choice. In the next few scenes that followed the revelations, you could see conflicting emotions.
在秀珍刚刚知道她的病情时，她不知道该怎么办。她甚至没告诉哲洙，因为她需要做出选择。在接下来的一些场面中，你可以感受到她矛盾的感情。
Looking at her man lovingly and reluctantly
深情而强颜欢笑地看着她爱的人
Su Jin had always been brave and fought for her love. Could she ever win in this fight against Alzhemier?
秀珍一直很勇敢地为她的爱而努力着，可她能赢这场和阿兹海默的战争吗？
She could not bear to leave Chul Soo because finally she had found the perfect man in her life. (Not many people can claim to have found the right person in their lives) She fought so hard to convince Chul Soo about their relationship and then with her father and now she had to leave him. Did she have any choice? Will she inflict too much pain on Chul Soo by staying with him?
她不忍离开哲洙，因为她终于找到了她生命中的真命天子（很少人能说他真的找到了真命天子）。她花了很多心力去使哲洙接受他们的关系，然后说服了她爸爸，但是现在她却必须离开他。她有别的选择吗？如果留在哲洙身边是不是会让他更痛苦？
Deep down inside she knew that sooner or later she would lose Chul Soo because she would lose the memories of their love, of Chul Soo and even herself. How much more time did Su Jin have to spend with Chul Soo? Should she bear him a child before she leaves him? Is there time for all these?
内心低沉，她知道很快她就会失去哲洙，因为她会失去对他的记忆，甚至是对自己的记忆。还有多少时间可以与他一起度过？她是不是该为他生一个孩子陪伴他？这一切还有时间吗？
Is there time?
还有时间吗？
The incident where Su Jin was lost on the street and bumped into Yong Min finally convinced Su Jin to break up with Chul Soo. She realized that she had forgotten about Chul Soo momentarily and then she would not be herself anymore.
在街上遇见勇民的事最后使秀珍确定了要离开哲洙，她知道她已经开始一阵阵地忘记哲洙，她不再是自己了。
In the next baseball court scene, she asked to break up with Chul Soo.
接下来在棒球场，她向哲洙提出了分手。
"Let's split up. What is love good for without memory?"
“我们分手吧，没有了记忆爱有什么用？”
Chul Soo, on the other hand, was still unaware of what he would be facing. His first reaction was to hope for a cure and to take care of Su Jin and to keep her with him. He did not realize the extent of the sorrow and agony he would have to go through by living with a Su Jin without memory.
而另一方面哲洙还不知道他将面临什么。他的第一个反应是希望治好秀珍，让她永远在自己身边。他还不知道悲伤会有多深，只是为秀珍会没有记忆而痛苦。
Lying on her bed looking at Chul Soo with blank eyes
躺在床上用空洞的眼神看着哲洙
In one incident, he doubted their love when Su Jin called out the name of her ex-lover and he asked the brain specialist “Who does she really love?”
当秀珍用她以前男朋友的名字叫他时，他对他们的爱产生了怀疑，还问脑科专家：“她真正爱的是谁？”
"She misses the old days with her ex"
“她想念着以前的那个男人……”
Finally Su Jin made the logical choice, which was also the most painful choice for the two of them, to terminate their relationship.
最终秀珍做出了合理的决定，但这也是对他们两个人而言最痛苦的决定：终止他们的关系
Although you have never said you loved me, I know you love me deeply
虽然你从未说过你爱我，但我心里深深地明白，你是爱我的
Highlights of AMTR:
橡皮擦的高潮：
Fun and excitement of courtship
追求的激情和趣事
Su Jin dressed herself up and brought food for Chul Soo to woo him
秀珍好好地打扮自己然后带吃的给哲洙
Chul Soo teasing Su Jin
哲洙嘲笑秀珍
Chasing after each other
追逐彼此
Doubts of their relationship
对他们关系的怀疑
Why do you love me? You are a princess and I am a beggar
你爱我什么？你是公主我是乞丐
I cannot commit
我不能对你负什么责任
Blissful marriage life
婚姻生活的甜蜜
Do you have lunch box for work?
你上班时有便当吗？
Chul Soo with regrets
后悔的哲洙
I have something to tell her before she completely forgets me, otherwise my life will be meaningless
有些话，我要在她完全忘记我之前说，不然我的人生也将没有意义
Reviving Su Jin's memory
唤醒秀珍的记忆
(Is this heaven?)
这里是天堂吗？
Su Jin gets to hear what she wanted all along and Chul Soo gets to say it
秀珍听到了她一直想听的，而哲洙终于说出了它
I love you
我爱你
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